Wednesday, July 26, 2006

Retrospection

I stare out of the window in bewilderness,
I know not what makes me smile
hopes leave me high and dry
I wish,sometimes, i had a vile..

life makes me a pessimist,
i've nothing left to boast
friends were never my cup of tea
now even love's labor is lost..

is it the world which has changed,
or me who is at fault
i dream of utopia which never can exist
i wake up with a rude jolt!

so what is it that matters,
to stay happy sans strife?
people say i am frustrated,
yes! i am frustrated with my life!!

6 Comments:

At 8:04 PM, July 29, 2006, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Hey Bala...

I would suggest that you join Punk Poets, an Orkut community! I think you will enjoy it and we will too :)

Anyway, I had a question... is this poem about you! It seems like it has some similarities but if it is really like about you.. then I have some more questions ;)

 
At 7:13 AM, July 31, 2006, Anonymous Anonymous said...

u nailed it...it has some parts about me and some fiction...just have to figure out which one is!!
shoot...

 
At 10:27 PM, July 31, 2006, Blogger Ruhi said...

wonder wat it is that makes you sound soo sad?! Btw, nice poem :-)

 
At 12:19 AM, August 03, 2006, Anonymous Anonymous said...

life is short to be frustrated.
recently i learnt
dnt pray to god of wht u desire but wht u deserve bcoz,wht u deserve is much more than wht desire..
and in this short life there is no point in waiting fr the ppl who are always with u..

 
At 9:09 PM, August 09, 2006, Blogger Kayln said...

Wow, that was a very beautiful poem.
You write beautifully, sir!
Keep it up!
:)

 
At 2:59 AM, August 11, 2006, Blogger hooliganking said...

@ anonymous:
woul you plz let go of ur anonymity?

 

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